What can I say it wasn't funny. Don't waste your time watching this video.
As for the comment about Egoraptor and hating newgrounds... I will gladly Hate newgrounds if this is the kind of thing that continues getting placed on the front page.
On the other hand if you had worked maybe a lot harder on the jokes (and by a lot harder I tend to mean don't write in the first thing you think about) then maybe it would've been good. I think there's a nice tinge in the animation that could be nice, but WORK ON IT.
First off it was an evil flash. This only helps it. Animation was nice and fluid, although some of it was really fast and other parts were really slow... so it seemed like maybe the artist was confused about how fast the action really was. I think the walk through the bus and then credit roll was kind of dissapointing (I was expecting more). Someone else said it, the song was good (love disturbed) but it doesn't fit as well with the animation.
Good Flash.
I like the pokes at American Idol, I liked the starting joke. I didn't like your animation style being a rip off of a crappy animation style, just when I thought it couldn't get worse. Everyone was annoying, so my final rating is an honest 3. Sorry you deserve no more for that.
This was very well animated, very pleasing to the eyes. It's very clear, in all the animation, and it had some good parodies, and some simply awesome music. Well worth the watch, can't wait to share it with others. Great Flash!
This video... just did not entertain me at all. The whole growing Pac-Man was interesting enough, but it didn't really have much backing. It was terribly short... and belonged in a large collection of jokes instead of just off by itself. For me it was a waste of time, and while that's exactly what flash videos are supposed to be, I shouldn't smell the waste coming off of my stagnant time while wasting it.
This one has definitely improved over its successor. It's longer, there's more jokes, its completely refined and much better than the last.
But I still think you can jam a few more jokes, and some funnier stuff as well. As many jokes as there were I only laughed twice.
Still Very Good. Crossing my fingers for a third one.
I judge these movies on three things, humor, creativeness, length.
I agree some movies should be short, but most of the time if you sit down and think of jokes, then obviously you get some bad ones, but you had one good joke in here, the others were normal ones, but they did help build up to the ultimate punchline which was good structure, but you need more length, next time try for three or four ultimate jokes.
It was pretty cool, and the music reminds me of like hardcore Mischeif Makers and Heavy Metal. The animation was great, mixed well with the music and did so many unexpected things. While this is clearly not humerous it is a great vid, I'm looking forward to more from you.
The flash was a good decent length.
That was about all that was enjoyable though, the fart was funny, but I think you made a bad move by having it be the ENTIRE flash. Ending was funny. Anyways, make it have more substance, don't focus so much on one joke, and you'll have a better flash.
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All 23 flash Reviews
Rated 0 / 5 stars May 14, 2009
Not Funny.
What can I say it wasn't funny. Don't waste your time watching this video.
As for the comment about Egoraptor and hating newgrounds... I will gladly Hate newgrounds if this is the kind of thing that continues getting placed on the front page.
On the other hand if you had worked maybe a lot harder on the jokes (and by a lot harder I tend to mean don't write in the first thing you think about) then maybe it would've been good. I think there's a nice tinge in the animation that could be nice, but WORK ON IT.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 13, 2009
Hmm...
First off it was an evil flash. This only helps it. Animation was nice and fluid, although some of it was really fast and other parts were really slow... so it seemed like maybe the artist was confused about how fast the action really was. I think the walk through the bus and then credit roll was kind of dissapointing (I was expecting more). Someone else said it, the song was good (love disturbed) but it doesn't fit as well with the animation.
Good Flash.
Thanks.
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 4, 2009
Not very funny, not very original.
I like the pokes at American Idol, I liked the starting joke. I didn't like your animation style being a rip off of a crappy animation style, just when I thought it couldn't get worse. Everyone was annoying, so my final rating is an honest 3. Sorry you deserve no more for that.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 4, 2009
A great flash film
This was very well animated, very pleasing to the eyes. It's very clear, in all the animation, and it had some good parodies, and some simply awesome music. Well worth the watch, can't wait to share it with others. Great Flash!
Rated 1 / 5 stars February 25, 2009
There wasn't a point...
This video... just did not entertain me at all. The whole growing Pac-Man was interesting enough, but it didn't really have much backing. It was terribly short... and belonged in a large collection of jokes instead of just off by itself. For me it was a waste of time, and while that's exactly what flash videos are supposed to be, I shouldn't smell the waste coming off of my stagnant time while wasting it.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 25, 2009
Better
This one has definitely improved over its successor. It's longer, there's more jokes, its completely refined and much better than the last.
But I still think you can jam a few more jokes, and some funnier stuff as well. As many jokes as there were I only laughed twice.
Still Very Good. Crossing my fingers for a third one.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 25, 2009
Short Sweet... but could've been longer.
I judge these movies on three things, humor, creativeness, length.
I agree some movies should be short, but most of the time if you sit down and think of jokes, then obviously you get some bad ones, but you had one good joke in here, the others were normal ones, but they did help build up to the ultimate punchline which was good structure, but you need more length, next time try for three or four ultimate jokes.
Rated 4 / 5 stars February 25, 2009
Nice Animation and Nice Music
It was pretty cool, and the music reminds me of like hardcore Mischeif Makers and Heavy Metal. The animation was great, mixed well with the music and did so many unexpected things. While this is clearly not humerous it is a great vid, I'm looking forward to more from you.
Thank you
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 19, 2008
Why so addictive.
I laughed at half the achievements in that game, and still a few made me stumped and angered. lol.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 19, 2008
eh, not funny really.
The flash was a good decent length.
That was about all that was enjoyable though, the fart was funny, but I think you made a bad move by having it be the ENTIRE flash. Ending was funny. Anyways, make it have more substance, don't focus so much on one joke, and you'll have a better flash.